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Ick - Hawk's Eyrie
It's all about releasing your inner sociopath
Peter David, bubbala... usually I like your writing. Except for a few black spots on your resume (The Woad to Wuin coming to mind here), you're very good and funny. You might have an ego the size of Manhattan, but I unfortunately expect that from people in your position.

However, I still can't get out of my mind the image of Madrox and Layla kissing. Do you not understand the ick factor here? Layla might have had a crush on Jamie for who knows how long, but until the very day you are writing about Madrox has only known Layla as a kid. As. A. Kid. A. Child. Despite her "knowing stuff", she was never an adult. Despite that scene he saw of them married, he's never known her as an adult. Never. So throwing those two together like that? Very creepy in the extreme.

I'm disappointed in you.

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